Sunday, November 8, 2009

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Lying awake in each others arms,
cuddled up in the early morn,
falling prey to each others charms,
I'd say, quintessentially lovelorn...

The light grows and the birds awaken,
the time of parting comes even closer,
kiss in haste, our embrace we tighten,
soon must we bid adieu to one another...

The goodbyes said, the parting kiss done,
I walk on home, in the fiery break of dawn,
etched in memory, the night shall remain,
lovely and tender, yet perhaps, a cause of pain...

7 comments:

Aditi Gupta said...

nice!

Abhishek Agarwal said...

Thank you.
:)

Unknown said...

Hey, really well written!!!

Abhishek Agarwal said...

Thank you. Not sure, but I think this is the first time you're commenting on my blog.
Bigger thank you!
Where do you blog at?

Pallavi said...

beautiful.... and so tender...u can actually feel the heartache. why do we even fall in love, in the first place? it ultimately ends in pain that can not be soothed. whether it's betrayal, yearning, jealousy or physical death.

Neha Garg said...

"quintessentially lovelorn"! Quite says a lot. Lovely read.

Abhishek Agarwal said...

@Neha - Thank you. :)